I got refused in 9th October 2018 for several reason but most importantly in the other reason section where they indicated my previous studies and qualification etc. My sop is stated below please have a look if i did any mistake:
Name: Saiful Islam Munna
Desired course: Bachelor of Business Administration
Introduction:
I am Saiful Islam Munna from Subid Bazar, Sylhet, Bangladesh. I was born in 25 June 1998. I have completed my Secondary School Certificate (SSC) examination in 2013 and Higher Secondary Certificate (HSC) in 2015 with GPA 3.88 and 3.67 respectively under the Board of Intermediate and Secondary Education Sylhet. After my Higher Secondary graduation, I completed a diploma in Business Management of Information System for 1.5 year. And to test my English proficiency I enrolled myself to IDP as an attended for IELTS examination in 2018. I got overall 6.0 in IELTS exam. Now I want to get admitted myself for an Under-graduation degree in Royal Roads University.
About my family in my home country:
In Bangladesh my family is well settled with my father MD. Badol Miah, mother Nargis Akter and three of my brothers. My family stays in Subid Bazar, Sylhet. I am the second son of my family. As a big brother of two I have some responsibility to look after my family for their better future. This duty of mine will bring me back to my family when my graduation would be done.
Reason behind choosing Canada to Study:
The main reason of choosing Canada is the quality of Canadian education. Canada has so many well ranked colleges and universities. And their degrees are recognized around the world. Even Canada is a bilingual country, which makes studying here an excellent opportunity to develop language skills and boost prospects for an interesting career.
In Bangladesh Canadian degrees are considered very prestigious and it will help to keep me ahead from others in the competitive job market of Bangladesh. Nowadays firms are looking for professional with degrees from highly reputed educational institutions. Therefore, I have chosen a well-known university in Canada to study which will help me to get a better job status in my country.
Reason behind selecting Royal Roads University:
The business faculty of Royal Roads has a great reputation. My SSC and HSC both were based on commerce background. Even my diploma was based on business management. Now I need to get admitted myself to the Royal Roads University in order to accomplish my bachelor degree. Even one of my friends who study there suggested me this university for their solid reputation of teaching and research.
Even the natural environment is of Royal Roads is quite impressive. Such environment will reduce homesickness of mine. And the study atmosphere is friendly for the international students.
Reason for choosing business administration to study:
The world of business is constantly on the move; new technologies and revolution are involving with more free thinking entrepreneurs. Business is getting more appealing with new business ideas, which is creating job opportunity more than any other sector.
Business administration deals with so many skills like communication, teamwork, leadership etc. and these plays an important role in our daily life.
Purpose of my visit:
The main intention of visiting Canada is to study. After my arrival in Canada I will follow all the rules and regulations of the country as well as I will follow the guideline given to me by the university. After a careful judgment university provided my letter of acceptance which indicates that my purpose of visit is only for study, nothing else. After completing my graduation I would return to my family and start my professional career.
Summary:
Regarding my future goal, after completing my graduation I will return to Bangladesh and apply my achieved knowledge in my professional career. As I submitted my land papers that indicates I have to come back to look after those land. And have to take the full responsibility as a big son of the family.
Therefore, I pray and hope that you will be kind enough to grant me a visa which could be a pathway of fulfilling my long awaited dreams and your co-operation in this regard will be highly appreciated.
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
Date: 1 September 2018
Name: Saiful Islam Munna
Desired course: Bachelor of Business Administration
Introduction:
I am Saiful Islam Munna from Subid Bazar, Sylhet, Bangladesh. I was born in 25 June 1998. I have completed my Secondary School Certificate (SSC) examination in 2013 and Higher Secondary Certificate (HSC) in 2015 with GPA 3.88 and 3.67 respectively under the Board of Intermediate and Secondary Education Sylhet. After my Higher Secondary graduation, I completed a diploma in Business Management of Information System for 1.5 year. And to test my English proficiency I enrolled myself to IDP as an attended for IELTS examination in 2018. I got overall 6.0 in IELTS exam. Now I want to get admitted myself for an Under-graduation degree in Royal Roads University.
About my family in my home country:
In Bangladesh my family is well settled with my father MD. Badol Miah, mother Nargis Akter and three of my brothers. My family stays in Subid Bazar, Sylhet. I am the second son of my family. As a big brother of two I have some responsibility to look after my family for their better future. This duty of mine will bring me back to my family when my graduation would be done.
Reason behind choosing Canada to Study:
The main reason of choosing Canada is the quality of Canadian education. Canada has so many well ranked colleges and universities. And their degrees are recognized around the world. Even Canada is a bilingual country, which makes studying here an excellent opportunity to develop language skills and boost prospects for an interesting career.
In Bangladesh Canadian degrees are considered very prestigious and it will help to keep me ahead from others in the competitive job market of Bangladesh. Nowadays firms are looking for professional with degrees from highly reputed educational institutions. Therefore, I have chosen a well-known university in Canada to study which will help me to get a better job status in my country.
Reason behind selecting Royal Roads University:
The business faculty of Royal Roads has a great reputation. My SSC and HSC both were based on commerce background. Even my diploma was based on business management. Now I need to get admitted myself to the Royal Roads University in order to accomplish my bachelor degree. Even one of my friends who study there suggested me this university for their solid reputation of teaching and research.
Even the natural environment is of Royal Roads is quite impressive. Such environment will reduce homesickness of mine. And the study atmosphere is friendly for the international students.
Reason for choosing business administration to study:
The world of business is constantly on the move; new technologies and revolution are involving with more free thinking entrepreneurs. Business is getting more appealing with new business ideas, which is creating job opportunity more than any other sector.
Business administration deals with so many skills like communication, teamwork, leadership etc. and these plays an important role in our daily life.
Purpose of my visit:
The main intention of visiting Canada is to study. After my arrival in Canada I will follow all the rules and regulations of the country as well as I will follow the guideline given to me by the university. After a careful judgment university provided my letter of acceptance which indicates that my purpose of visit is only for study, nothing else. After completing my graduation I would return to my family and start my professional career.
Summary:
Regarding my future goal, after completing my graduation I will return to Bangladesh and apply my achieved knowledge in my professional career. As I submitted my land papers that indicates I have to come back to look after those land. And have to take the full responsibility as a big son of the family.
Therefore, I pray and hope that you will be kind enough to grant me a visa which could be a pathway of fulfilling my long awaited dreams and your co-operation in this regard will be highly appreciated.